Neisha's own writing goal has been to add more detail into her stories. She has reflected on her writing and knows that she has tried hard and has got a lot better at this!
Ka pai Neisha, keep it up!
Neisha's holiday writing
IN the holidays I
got my eres perd. And I went to the beash and I got a igscrsmn. I got a choklit
igscrsmn. I wnt to my atetis home I wnt to Chemas. I lid the basey slad. I sewd
a bot going up and don and I went on it.
By Neisha.
In the holidays I
got my ears pierced. And I went to the beach and I got a icecream. I got a
chocolate icecream. I went to my Aunty’s home and I went to Chipmunks. I liked
the bouncy slide. I saw a boat going up and down and I went on it.
lol... Nice 1 Neisha!!
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