Wednesday, August 1, 2012

New Zealand wins a Bronze Medal!

We were excited when New Zealand won our first medal at the Olympics. We watched the video of this event and focused on using descriptive words in our stories.
The hois krash ova the fens and New Zelind wund 1 broons medil. We caom 3 plas and it was Mac Tod. He got wan hois fens not ova and it was xting.
The horse crashed over the fence and New Zealand won 1 bronze medal. We came 3rd place and it was Mark Todd. He got one horse fence knocked over and it was exciting.
By Robbie.

When the horse juppt ovr the fee’s it went crah. The horse is very good at jupping hih.
When the horse jumped over the fence it went crash. The horse is very good at jumping high.
By Kassia.

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