Monday, July 16, 2012

My awesome writing!

Ella T wrote an amazing story about her holidays. We were working on adding in some describing words to make our stories more interesting. 


I went to the sow and it was wed and I likd it. I love it. It wos osm. I went sole donn the sep hill.
I went to the snow and it was windy and I liked it. I loved it. It was awesome. I went slowly down the steep hill.
By Ella T
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4 comments:

  1. harry scottAugust 7, 2012 at 4:43 PM

    i liae yuwr sorey

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  2. harryAugust 7, 2012 at 4:51 PM

    yuwr sorey was so osm

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  3. Hunter.tAugust 7, 2012 at 5:02 PM

    yeah I know Ella rember when i let go of your skey and i ran after it and my snow bord hit thos ather peple.

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  4. kabreeAugust 9, 2012 at 6:56 PM

    I like your witheing EllaT

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